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This was a little bit of a letdown.
OK, so it was more geared towards the last comic, which I should be working on now instead of doing this, but whatever. And it was another instance that I wanted to use very little in the way of dialogue and panels.
But no one could figure out what was going on. Go figure.
So once more I started pasting more scene images in and shoehorning in dialogue. The scene itself seems to lack tension, which doesn't lead well into the actual punchline where while Donna was hanging by a wire, Dash can fly. Whether her non-plussed attitude washed the tension out in the earlier panels or if it was just sloppy scene choices or just needed to be longer aside, it was a flop.
But it does set a precedent for further comics featuring The Doctor and Doctor Dash.
Also had real problems sourcing an image for the final panel. Just doesn't work for me.
Oh wah wah I'm all tortured artist. Pbbbbfsch.
OK, so it was more geared towards the last comic, which I should be working on now instead of doing this, but whatever. And it was another instance that I wanted to use very little in the way of dialogue and panels.
But no one could figure out what was going on. Go figure.
So once more I started pasting more scene images in and shoehorning in dialogue. The scene itself seems to lack tension, which doesn't lead well into the actual punchline where while Donna was hanging by a wire, Dash can fly. Whether her non-plussed attitude washed the tension out in the earlier panels or if it was just sloppy scene choices or just needed to be longer aside, it was a flop.
But it does set a precedent for further comics featuring The Doctor and Doctor Dash.
Also had real problems sourcing an image for the final panel. Just doesn't work for me.
Oh wah wah I'm all tortured artist. Pbbbbfsch.
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lol, exactly
DASH!
You done? I'm a pegasus, remember? Come on, your gone 2 years and you forget I can fly?
Well, it's been more than 2 years, at least for me, time travel you can't keep it straight in your head.
Doctor, you've told me this before...
DASH! You done? I'm a pegasus, remember? Come on, your gone 2 years and you forget I can fly? Well, it's been more than 2 years, at least for me, time travel you can't keep it straight in your head. Doctor, you've told me this before...